Tuesday, 28 February 2012

Never shall I let go of my Trust

Could it be Could it be
from far and wide have i sailed
 the glissering night shaded blowing
         yet had not blown away my trust
 night had came and my shining knight in armor was rusty
the flowers so alive yet much like plastic
 time was a concern
I opened my eyes flipping my pages
  like my eyes and flowers everything felt dry
i had grown to pitiness
the books i have so paved thrown away effortlessly
just for my trust
         have you came sooner I wouldn't have lost my trust

speaker is Dr Gauchet Vincent
audience is Dr Gauchet Vincent's love
Message is that time can make you question about many things such as trust

Peer edited by Connor Gallager
"there are no errors, good job Ali, nice poem but try not to extend it."